Here is the last round of presentations on Jiri Kolar.
Each video includes a biography, an explanation of visual poetry and
a personal analysis and interpretation of one of Kolar's poems.
Enjoy!
Alix Demouveau
Cathy Dransard video 1
Cathy Dransard video 2
Alix, I think your analisis is great , your argument and how you used them made me understand more about this visual poetry
ReplyDeleteAlix : Her video is verry easy to understand cause of it's numerous pictures. And also she defined the terms of poetry visual and poet. That is a good job !
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ReplyDeleteDear Lucie, your video is very interesting. Sometimes I do not understand you, because you have a strong French accent. And Ambre your video is super! Pretty well elaborated.
ReplyDeleteMarie: This video has good composition, but what I don't like is bad fluency of speaking. I don't think accent. Otherwise, good work. :)
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ReplyDeleteAlix, I like your comments on pictures.
ReplyDeleteCathy, it is a pity that you often have a screen without pictures.
Marie and Ambre, your speech is nice. Like it. But you could use more images.
Lucie, you speak comprehensibly. It's good.
Marie-I liked the content of the video and what it says about Jiří Kolář. But I don't like your talk. You are very often stopping to find information or just thinking how is this pronounced. And the cuted end. I was kinda upset about it. If you would worked on the speech and read the text once more, it would be really good video
DeleteAmbre: Still, the video is shorter, you included all important informatoins. The choice of example is also nice. It describes his work. You could just talk little slower. Sometimes it was harder to understand you.
ReplyDeleteI have finally learnt something about visual poetry, you did very well.
ReplyDeleteAll your videos are very interesting and sophisticated. I think that you have taken a lot of time to creat a video. I have never heard about Jiri Kolar but I think you described it well. Thank you for your videos. It is a really good job!
ReplyDeleteAlix- Your video is really nice, but maybe you can do a better audio, because of the noise in the background. Otherwise good job!
ReplyDeleteCathy – I really like the style of the video (maybe just put more images there), what a shame that you talk so quietly. Don´t be shy!
Lucie- Here I would choose better audio like in Alix video. Otherwise great job!
Marie- Great audio, I like your confidence. Perhaps more images. Well done!
Ambre- I like the way you describe the artwork. You can just speak a little bit slower. Good job!
Wow, great work. Atleast now I know who Jiri Kolar was.
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